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Eragon A New Begin part 1

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Eragon: A New Begin part 1


It wasen't very long ago that Eragon and Aaya married. Now Saphira and Thorn had an egg and Arya and Eragon had a baby boy. The boy was called Brom. Because Eragon whanted to because this baby reminded him a lot of Brom. He whanted that his child was named afther his father and Arya also liked the name to. Not long afther they touch that the world was saved, some people said that there was another new shadow called Grimizan. Grimizan was mutts more stronger the Durza everyone said so then it should be true. Grimizan had already burned more then 3 villages. Grimizan would come to Arya, Eragon, Fanfir and Saphira. Maybe you think now. How did Saphira gett an child with Thorn as he isen't by here? That will later be teld in the story. Grimizan would steal the egg and die Brom if they did do nothing. Arya and Eragon had no other chooce. They would give Brom to Emily (An friend of them) and stop the egg at a save place in the wood. So they runned to a very save city not so far away from here. And when they where by Emily they would ask it. Emily did the door open. Emily is a very friendly and caring person.

"Please take our child Emily. The shadow Grimizan would die him if whe don't give him to someone else. You know that the child's name is Brom. Please take care of him." Arya said crying. Emily notted and smilled, Eragon and Arya thanked and gave the baby to here.

"Care about him like it is your own child. Don't tell him that you are not his mother before his 14e and try to tell that his parents where someone eles. That is the best and the savest for him." Eragon said and did an necklace with an dragontooth around the neck of little Brom. Then Emily notted and closed the door. Eragon and Arya where happy that nothing would happen to Brom. Eragon and Arya flyed at Firnen and Saphira to the wood. There they did the egg at an save place under the ground so no one ever could find it before they where there. They they flyed away so they could save the world again for a while.

14 Years later:

"Mom! I go outside and hunt for some food for tomorrow." Brom said and catched his wapons. Emily notted and hugged here son. Bromwas already 14 years old. He lived in a small home with his mom Emily and his dad Toby. Brom runned outside the house. He walked to the wood so he could starting to hunt.

He walked around searching for an animal to die. The he saw an rabbit jumping around. Brom walked closer and closer to the rabbit and when he was at the closed he whanted to shot but at that moment the rabbit heard Brom's move and he runned in a hole behind him under the tree. Brom sighed and walked to the hole. And when he was by the hole he did his hand in it. He feld the rabbit but he feld something others to behind the rabbit. So he tried to break a bitt of the hole so he could look if he could catch the rabbit and maybe look what that other thing was. But when he almost had the rabbit, the rabbit jumped fast out of his hole and jumped away. Brom runned afther the rabbit but he feld down at the ground and so the rabbit was gone. Brom growed a bitt and then he walked back to look what that other thing in the hole was.

He did his hand again in the hole but when he whanted to pick it up it was to heavy so he did his other hand in it. And when he had that other thing out the hole to his mount feld open. He saw that he had found a purple stone. It was so beautiful, maybe he could gett with this stone some food for his family? But Brom touch it was to beautiful to give away. So Brom did the stone in his back and walked back to his house.

"And what did you caught Brom?" Emily asked and smilled. Brom didn't whant to say that he founded a stone because maybe his parents would sale it.

"I almost catched a rabbit but i feld down so he runned away." Brom just sayed. Emily sighed and notted that Toby now better could go to try and find some food.

Afther Toby comed back to house Emily and Toby sad down at the chair. The whanted to talk to Brom. Brom asked why he had to. He did not do anything fould.

"Well... As you see Brom. You not really look like us. You have brown hair and green eyes and whe have dark brown eyes and black hair." Emily said. Brom notted.

"Yeah that i true but you two said my grandparents had brown hair and green eyes." Brom said and smilled a bit.

"Yeah that is true that did whe sai but there is something eles that whe already whanted to tell you very long. But whe only could tell it when you was 14 years old. So now whe will tell the truth." Emily said.

"But mom and dad you two are always telling me the truth. So why would you two ever lie to me?" Brom asked carefully.

"Because... Whe aren't your real parents." Toby and Emily said with a sigh. Brom shokked he feld like his hard stopped.

"No that can't be true. You two are my reak parents right?" Brom asked shokked.

"No that isen't true. Oke listen Brom. Your parents where two dragon ridders called Eragon and Arya. They have saved the world from the evil king Galbatorix. You know the story's about Eragon and Arya. Whe have told them all. So you are nammed to your grandfather Brom. But your parents gave you to us to protect you because there is an new shadow awake called Grimizan. Grimizan is more stronger then Durza was and he would try to find you and the new dragon eggs. So they stopped one of them away. Also there is another egg that is gone but Grimizan has find it already. This egg was of Shruikan before he died. Whe don't know who the mom was of it but one thing was sure he had an egg and now Grimizan has that egg in his hands. The egg don't whant to hatch by him so maybe by someone eles. Eragon touch Saphira would gett an egg with Firnen but that wasen't true. She didn't tell him she would gett an egg with Thorn. But Eragon will later see that as the egg is hatching. Dragons are only laying one egg every time. One of them have Arya and Eragon stop in the wood. But this is all i can tell you Brom." Emily said. Brom had an sad face. He didn't cry but was very sad.

"I understand it... So you two aren't may real parents? Arya and Eragon are it? My parents are the last dragonridders? I will be on my room so i can think of it i whant to be allone for an while." Brom said and walked away.

Brom was sithing at his room and looking to the weird stone he had found. And then at the moment he did it at his bad there comes a crack into it. And another one and another one. And afther there where a lot of cracks in the stone it broke. It was an egg! Brom looked with open mount to what was lying at his bad. At his bad was lying an little purple dragon!
Finally the first part of my Eragon story. XD And yess that little dragon as stile no name. XD
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And Dude, great grammar!